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There is a great benefit with reflection; it affords the opportunity to look back at what you have accomplished, allows you to smile at the things that went well, cringe at what did not, and sometimes laugh at how wondrous it all is.
As I look back on my journey so far, there are two maxims that I've carried with me from the moment I found them:
"Help your brother’s boat across, and your own will reach the shore." - Hindu Proverb
"If you want to go fast go alone, if you want to go far go together." African Proverb
PS: Part II will follow